Thursday, March 15, 2018

Week 9 Story: The Ever-Shrinking City

Once there was a well-populated fortress city surrounded by acres of open savanna. The people of the city didn’t know much of keeping livestock, and preferred to hunt for their food. For generations this was very lucrative. Bands of hunters would travel the surrounding region with falcons and dogs, always bringing back plenty of meat.

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A falconer on a horse. (Wikimedia Commons)

After a while, these hunts would begin to return less and less meat for the city’s population. When at last the once-plentiful large game was made extinct, there was much bickering among the city’s leaders. Some suggested a new vegetarian diet. Others wanted to pack up and move to some untouched land. At last, a magician offered a solution.

“By my magic, I can make this city—and everyone in it—a quarter of the size that it is now. A family might then survive a month on a single prairie dog.”

There was widespread agreement that nobody would be able to tell the difference between the old and new sizes except where hunting was concerned. After all, there were no nearby cities to contend with. So the population agreed that the magician should shrink the city. When he did, all was well for years. People feasted on rats and prairie dogs, but otherwise carried on as though nothing had changed.

Eventually, even the small mammals were driven to extinction and again the city went hungry. The people appealed to the magician to use his magic once more, so that the city would be a thirtieth of its original size. This way, they could live on the plentiful bugs and worms. The magician agreed, and again the city had plenty to eat once the people grew accustomed to eating insects.

Of course, the hunters, with their tiny falcons and dogs, were so effective in their work that there were soon be no bugs to be found nearby. The magician had unfortunately by then drowned in a puddle, so there was no option left but to become a tiny nomadic hunters, clearing distant lands of bugs and vermin.



Author’s note: the Chinese myth “The Little Hunting Dog” features a travelling band of tiny soldiers who hunt down flies and other bugs. The story doesn’t give any explanation about where they come from, so I decided to offer a backstory. The ending of my story is consistent with a common theme of the Chinese myths that I read, which tend to have a “and that’s that” abrupt closing.


Bibliography. The Chinese Fairy Book, edited by R. Wilhelm and translated by Frederick H. Martens. Web Link.

3 comments:

  1. I love the theme of your blog. Red is often seen as too powerful of a color for a background, but when you make the whole darn thing crimson and creme, it's hard to disapprove! I also really like the visuals here, I think this would make a great movie. The idea of being so small is pretty cool, but also terrifying. I liked how casually you mentioned someone drowning in a puddle, as if it were perfectly normal!

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  2. The first thing that caught my attention in the story was the picture you included. That is such a cool picture that truly helped me to visualize the story in a different way. I enjoyed all of the imagery in the story as well. I am all about using all the details so that the reader can really imagine what is going on. Overall, this story was very interesting and had some fun twists on it, which I enjoyed!

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  3. I love that you added more backstory to the original. So many times when reading folktales, the story just seems to start in the middle of it all and I always wonder how things got to that point. I also really like your writing style. You give the story a very nice pace that makes the story just flow as you read it.

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